You do have potential
Keep practicing animation and your other talents. I look forward to seeing what you are bringing to my collab table.
Pretty funny to me
Now that I heard your voice, I believe you can defiantly pull off an Ike in my cartoon. Did you do both voices in this, just curious, because the character that took the gameboy or whatever sounds like it would go good for the character you are voicing over for me.
yes i did both voices :)
not bad, but not good
I can see you put your efforts into the animation parts very well. That I appreciate,
but here is where to improve.
Add sound effects
maybe if possible, add voice acting?
extend the movie length.
you did a fine job animating, but focus on these areas that need improvement.
I wish you luck on your future submissions.
Thanks for that! (See above response)
needs lots of improvement
I'm going to be very honest... this was not appealing at all.
I'll also say that while newgrounds does host hentia... I rarely find hentia games that actually work. You have to remember, this is not a porn site, and if you submit bad content, expect to be trolled until there is nothing left of you.
The idea of what looked like a toy black dildo, coming in clip art with sounds, just didn't seem to come together right.
To improve, I suggest staying away from making hentia unless your 100% sure that what your making is going to be good. When hentia goes bad, it usually is either annoying, or just gross.
other areas to fix are actually making animations to go with this. I'm not talking about the black dildo, I'm talking about this as a whole. In real life, if your f***ing a person, I don't believe they are going to just stay stone still and moan. They bounce, they have physics. unless there dead.
Directions on what to do would of been nice also.
I believe you have something going, you just went in the wrong direction with this flash.
Don't rush to make and finish a flash. I admit I tend to slack off alot myself.
But good flash apps always take time to make. Rome wasent built in a day, so shouldn't your flash.
This is an awesome tutorial
I have a heck of a lot more fun drawing manga and the sort after have viewing this.
Thanks for spending your time making this. I enjoyed this a real lot.
I laughed my butt off on the toughest difficulty. It is quite funny to see all those bullets flying at once. But where the game strives also lacks in certain areas. As much as I appreciate the game, I feel like it could use a different background, rather than just default white.
Some sounds would go great with this. Maybe add some suiting music to this too? I like what I see, keep going, and improve on the areas that need it. I wish you luck on future submissions.
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