AuntyBarbra's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[dawgs II]

You do have potential

Keep practicing animation and your other talents. I look forward to seeing what you are bringing to my collab table.

[Epic Oswald (demo)]

Pretty funny to me

Now that I heard your voice, I believe you can defiantly pull off an Ike in my cartoon. Did you do both voices in this, just curious, because the character that took the gameboy or whatever sounds like it would go good for the character you are voicing over for me.

dere-kotsu responds:

yes i did both voices :)

[Stick-Practice]

not bad, but not good

I can see you put your efforts into the animation parts very well. That I appreciate,
but here is where to improve.

Add sound effects
maybe if possible, add voice acting?
extend the movie length.

you did a fine job animating, but focus on these areas that need improvement.
I wish you luck on your future submissions.

Byronyello responds:

Thanks for that! (See above response)

[The Assassin [teaser]]

teasers don't belong in the portal

As the summary describes, teasers aren't meant for the portal. If you really wanted to post a teaser of something you are working on, The alpha section of newgrounds is the place to submit it to. While this actually may have the potency to be good, it needs some work and debugging. The animation when I viewed it seemed slightly choppy. I also noticed in the near end that when the assassin's target was killed, I could see the pupil showing past the left eye lid. Its not totally bad at all, the flash, you just need maybe to practice more on animation, and know what belongs in the portal and what not. Whenever you feel the slightest hint of boredom, practice in flash, that's what I do.

Work on this animation and small side projects, don't let ambition get the best of you. Most of all, never ever rush. Keep practising, someday, you can appease the guys on newgrounds with brilliantly created works of art, and give the crap submitted here even more of a bad name. Good luck in your endevors. And I hope to see this teaser become an actual animation.